My Goodness, a doughnut!!!!!!!

As written by my 9 year old.

My goodness, a doughnut!!!!!


I am writing this story about Mr. Gan A Dan Dan. He is an old man who lived in Doddle Town in Co. Daff in a uncharted country. Mr Gan A Dan Dan loved doughnuts. If you are wondering how much he loved doughnuts, put it like this he wouldn’t live without them. His real name is Dack’O De, but everyone called him Mr Gan A Dan Dan. His son ,Dackle, owned a doughnut café .It was called “Dan Dan’s Doughnuts” and Mr Gan A Dan Dan loved them. Know getting to the story……………….


Mr .Gan A Dan Dan woke up and looked out of his window .What a lovely day he thought. Just the day I need to bring my grandson shopping . Mr.Gan A Dan Dan had an egg and toast for breakfast. He went to collect his grandson, Mick. He was at the door. He ran out to him. “Well”, Mr Gan a Dan Dan said, “Let’s go shopping”.

First of all they went to the library, then at 12 o’clock they went to McDaffys and at one o’clock they went to Dan Dan’s doughnuts. Dan Dan Doughnuts had a big doughnut had the top and was a glass building. After both of them had about 10 doughnuts they went shopping.
“Da Da”, Mick said.
“Yes my boy”
“Could we go to Bips first?”
“Of course we can”, Mr Gan said.
They were walking to Bips and Mick said
“Grandpa isn’t that the doughnut on top of Dan’s doughnut shop? That…that gigantic doughnut walking towards us?”
“By golly, you’re right!”, he said.
And indeed he was, coming up the road was the big doughnut from the top of Dan Dan’s Doughnuts.

“Are you Mr Gan a Dan Dan?”, the doughnut asked.
“I am”, Mr Gan a Dan Dan said.
“Then you must come with me”, the doughnut said, “you are the only one who can save doughnut land.”
“Why am I the only one?”, he asked.
“Because you love doughnuts so much”, he said, “please save us”.
“All right”, Mr Gan a Dan Dan said, “but only if my grandson can come too”.
“Of course he can”, said the doughnut (whose name is Nutty), “get in the hole in my tummy”.
Mick and Nr Gan a Dan Dan got into his tummy and started twirling around. In less than two seconds they were in doughnut land. It was quiet, too quiet.
“Come to doughnut Castle and we shall explain all”, Nutty said.
Doughnut Castle was like a fairy castle but it was in the shape of a doughnut. In the castle they explained that doughnut land had been taken under attack by drugs, bad drugs.
“So let me get this straight”, Mr Gan a Dan Dan said, “You want me to stop the drugs?”.
“Precisely, great thinking”
“Do I get to have lots of doughnuts?”, he asked.
“Of Course you can”, King Doughy said.
“I’m in”, he answered.

For the nest 3 days they planned out what to do. Drugs are small to him so he thought it would be easy. They knew they were planning to attack. This is their plan: let the drugs attack and Mr Gan a Dan Dan hide. Mr Gan a Dan Dan jumps out when least expected and fights them away.

So on Thursday 25th October, early in the morning the drugs attack. There war WAR!!!!!!!!!. The doughnuts were using dough blasters and the drugs used teeth blazers (these fire out teeth and if you get hit you are knocked out for 2 hours). One doughnut was about to be strangled when it gasped “ Look our saviours has come”
All the drugs turn around to see Mr. Gan a Dan Dan with a Hoover type thing.
“Die you drugs!!!!!!!!!”, he shouted as he sucked them in with the hovered thing that Mick had invented. One by one the drugs got sucked into the Hoover. The General begged for mercy, “Yeah right”, said Mr. Gan a Dan Dan sucking the very last drug in.

“Thanks You!! Thanks You!!” thanked King Doughy.
“You’re welcome”, Mr. Gan a Dan Dan replied, “but we must be going home now I’m afraid.”
“I will take you”, said Nutty.
They got into the hole in the middle and flew away.

They arrived in the exact same time and space as they left but they had a piece of paper signed by the King.


The End








SJB