Is Neil Young in the Premier League of Lyricists?

Posted by: Sloop John B on 10 September 2015

I love a lot of Neil Young's music, I'm a fan, have seen him live so this is NOT an anti Neil Young post.

 

However is Neil up there with the best of them?

By the best of them I'm referring to Dylan, Simon, Morrison (V) and Cohen and others who I'm no doubt forgetting.

 

Got to thinking about this while listening to Zuma, one of my favourite Young albums.

 

"I saw you in Mercedes Benz
Practicing self-defense
You got it pretty good I guess
I couldn't see your eyes"

 

I might live a thousand years before I know what that means.

 

 

Although there are Young lyrics I love - the opening to "Powederfinger" - his lyrics for me never reach the pinnacle of the artists mentioned above.

 

 

I really don't want to be pompous and end this post with ........."Discuss" but what do you guys think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Posted on: 10 September 2015 by Sneaky SNAIC

Get the Buffalo Springfield 4-CD box set if you don't have it.  It's got a lot of Neil Young and also other incredible stuff on there.  If you have it then...the answer is I don't know, but I tend to the negative...his lyrics rarely match anything resembling a feeling I've felt before.  He's anti-everything and sometimes seems to babble...even Jim Morrison was easier to understand in some instances.

 

He's a great guitar player...but how many bands have covered Dylan songs compared to Neil Young?  Both could play harmonica and guitar, sing and write lyrics.  Dylan never was a nightingale, Neil Young has a weird voice that's different; he sings in a weird falsetto.

Posted on: 10 September 2015 by winkyincanada

I think he's alright. Let's be honest that very little, if any, lyrical content in popular music would survive as poetry. But Neil's music very often connects in a way where the lyrics play a big part. Have listen to Thrasher to see what I mean. The words aren't all there is. Rubbish as a poem, of course, but as a song, the words are really cool. "burned my credit card for fuel" is a great line.

 

"Thrasher"

They were hiding behind hay bales,
They were planting
in the full moon
They had given all they had
for something new
But the light of day was on them,
They could see the thrashers coming
And the water
shone like diamonds in the dew.

And I was just getting up,
hit the road before it's light
Trying to catch an hour on the sun
When I saw
those thrashers rolling by,
Looking more than two lanes wide
I was feelin'
like my day had just begun.

Where the eagle glides ascending
There's an ancient river bending
Down the timeless gorge of changes
Where sleeplessness awaits
I searched out my companions,
Who were lost in crystal canyons
When the aimless blade of science
Slashed the pearly gates.

It was then I knew I'd had enough,
Burned my credit card for fuel
Headed out to where the pavement
turns to sand
With a one-way ticket
to the land of truth
And my suitcase in my hand
How I lost my friends
I still don't understand.

They had the best selection,
They were poisoned with protection
There was nothing that they needed,
Nothing left to find
They were lost in rock formations
Or became park bench mutations
On the sidewalks
and in the stations
They were waiting, waiting.

So I got bored and left them there,
They were just deadweight to me
Better down the road
without that load
Brings back the time
when I was eight or nine
I was watchin' my mama's T.V.,
It was that great
Grand Canyon rescue episode.

Where the vulture glides descending
On an asphalt highway bending
Thru libraries and museums,
galaxies and stars
Down the windy halls of friendship
To the rose clipped by the bullwhip
The motel of lost companions
Waits with heated pool and bar.

But me I'm not stopping there,
Got my own row left to hoe
Just another line
in the field of time
When the thrasher comes,
I'll be stuck in the sun
Like the dinosaurs in shrines
But I'll know the time has come
To give what's mine.
Posted on: 10 September 2015 by winkyincanada
Originally Posted by Sloop John B:

 

 

I might live a thousand years before I know what that means.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh yeah, you think that one's tough? Explain "After the Goldrush" to me!

Posted on: 10 September 2015 by joerand

In some ways I'd liken Young to McCartney in that both have written so many songs in a wide variety of musical styles. Some lyrics profound and poignant, some poetic, others simply frivolous for the sake of the melody. Young differs in that he can tend more to abstract, non sequitur lyrics, thereby prompting the listener to question the overall meaning of the song. Some Young lyrics can have you thinking 'WTF' thereby capturing your attention with his words, and that's powerful.

 

The aforementioned "Thrasher" and "Powderfinger" are good examples, as is "Cortez The Killer". Another is "Pocahontas". The first four verses are poetic and lyrical, and paint a fluid, sympathetic picture of the plight of Native Americans in light of US Imperialism. The final verse jumps to subjects of Marlon Brando, Hollywood, and the Astrodome. Seems a break in flow unless you have some knowledge of the basis for Brando's Oscar award refusal and realize the theme of the song is about exploitation and commercialism.

 

Pocahontas

Aurora borealis
The icy sky at night
Paddles cut the water
In a long and hurried flight
From the white man
to the fields of green
And the homeland
we've never seen.

They killed us in our tepee
And they cut our women down
They might have left some babies
Cryin' on the ground
But the firesticks
and the wagons come
And the night falls
on the setting sun.

They massacred the buffalo
Kitty corner from the bank
The taxis run across my feet
And my eyes have turned to blanks
In my little box
at the top of the stairs
With my Indian rug
and a pipe to share.

I wish a was a trapper
I would give thousand pelts
To sleep with Pocahontas
And find out how she felt
In the mornin'
on the fields of green
In the homeland
we've never seen.

And maybe Marlon Brando
Will be there by the fire
We'll sit and talk of Hollywood
And the good things there for hire
And the Astrodome
and the first tepee
Marlon Brando, Pocahontas and me
Marlon Brando, Pocahontas and me
Pocahontas.

Posted on: 11 September 2015 by Kevin-W

Tricky one - NY is undoubtedly in the front rank of songwriters, and although some of his lyrics are great, he is maybe a bit too inconsistent. Just outside the very top five, maybe.

 

For me, the greatest lyricist in pop/rock is Chuck Berry, for his technical (eg scansion, rhyme), allusive and narrative skills. His economy is staggering - not a single word, syllable, or breath, is wasted; and his ability to evoke whole worlds and lives in under three minutes never fails to leave me aghast in admiration.

 

Then Dylan, for many of the same reasons, although Dylan's language is more elliptical, and his intent more literary. Ian Curtis is perhaps the closest England has ever come to Dylan in his brilliant use use of imagery, although his writing is less dense than Dylan's, and perhaps more direct.

 

Roger Waters is more direct still, but at his very best, his writing has real simplicity, acuity and emotional power, which is why his finest work (DSOTM, WYWH, Animals, ATD, some of the Wall, TPACOHH, TFC), resonates with listeners of all ages and backgrounds.

 

Lennon at his best, obviously (Macca could turn out brilliant lyrics, as per "Eleanor Rigby", "She's Leaving Home" etc, but could often be utterly facile - unlike Lennon, whose greatest sin as a wordsmith was sentimentality). And as a world-weary chronicler of British life and manners, Ray Davies has no equal.

 

There are others who are really really good, just outside the front rank - Paul Simon (although I don't like his music), Kate Bush, Chuck D of Public Enemy, Sly Stone, Bobbie Gentry ("it was the third of June,  another sleepy dusty Delta day/I was out picking cotton and my brother was baling hay" - that's writing!), Howard Devoto, Mark E Smith (when you can hear him ), Peter Gabriel (post Genesis, mostly), Jarvis Cocker, Lou Reed, Bowie (sometimes), Marvin Gaye, Scott Walker, Townes Van Zandt, Nick Cave, John Lydon, Momus, Joni Mitchell, Morrissey, Polly Harvey, Roy Harper... and Bernie Taupin's penned a few belters. Alex Turner is genius, even if he has never quite scaled the heights of that first AM album.

 

However, real genius lyricists are to be found in an earlier era - Cole Porter, Sammy Cahn, Alan J Lerner, Sondheim, Johnny Mercer, etc - these are virtuoso writers of dazzling technical ability and, most of all, sparkling, life-affirming wit, and to be honest I think only Dylan and Berry can stand with them.

 

 

Posted on: 11 September 2015 by Moog

'The lyrics aren't supposed to mean that much
They're just a vehicle for a lovely voice'  - Untitled Track on Mansun's Attack of the Grey Lantern's.

Paul McCartney's Ram most of lyrics are half baked but that doesn't stop it from being a great album.

Mull of Kintyre lyrics has more substance than a lot of his 70's solo output but that doesn't stop it from being bloody awful.

 

With song lyrics isn't 90% (proven formula) of it in the delivery? 

 

 

Posted on: 11 September 2015 by Sneaky SNAIC

Not sure where I heard it, but someone said for a song to be truly great it has to be easy to remember and sing...I like that one.  Also like some humor...so McCartney is one of my favorites, how many Beatles tunes in general are easy to remember, recognize and sing in your head all day?

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by Frenchnaim
Originally Posted by Kevin-W:

Tricky one - NY is undoubtedly in the front rank of songwriters, and although some of his lyrics are great, he is maybe a bit too inconsistent. Just outside the very top five, maybe.

 

For me, the greatest lyricist in pop/rock is Chuck Berry, for his technical (eg scansion, rhyme), allusive and narrative skills. His economy is staggering - not a single word, syllable, or breath, is wasted; and his ability to evoke whole worlds and lives in under three minutes never fails to leave me aghast in admiration.

 

Then Dylan, for many of the same reasons, although Dylan's language is more elliptical, and his intent more literary. Ian Curtis is perhaps the closest England has ever come to Dylan in his brilliant use use of imagery, although his writing is less dense than Dylan's, and perhaps more direct.

 

Roger Waters is more direct still, but at his very best, his writing has real simplicity, acuity and emotional power, which is why his finest work (DSOTM, WYWH, Animals, ATD, some of the Wall, TPACOHH, TFC), resonates with listeners of all ages and backgrounds.

 

Lennon at his best, obviously (Macca could turn out brilliant lyrics, as per "Eleanor Rigby", "She's Leaving Home" etc, but could often be utterly facile - unlike Lennon, whose greatest sin as a wordsmith was sentimentality). And as a world-weary chronicler of British life and manners, Ray Davies has no equal.

 

There are others who are really really good, just outside the front rank - Paul Simon (although I don't like his music), Kate Bush, Chuck D of Public Enemy, Sly Stone, Bobbie Gentry ("it was the third of June,  another sleepy dusty Delta day/I was out picking cotton and my brother was baling hay" - that's writing!), Howard Devoto, Mark E Smith (when you can hear him ), Peter Gabriel (post Genesis, mostly), Jarvis Cocker, Lou Reed, Bowie (sometimes), Marvin Gaye, Scott Walker, Townes Van Zandt, Nick Cave, John Lydon, Momus, Joni Mitchell, Morrissey, Polly Harvey, Roy Harper... and Bernie Taupin's penned a few belters. Alex Turner is genius, even if he has never quite scaled the heights of that first AM album.

 

However, real genius lyricists are to be found in an earlier era - Cole Porter, Sammy Cahn, Alan J Lerner, Sondheim, Johnny Mercer, etc - these are virtuoso writers of dazzling technical ability and, most of all, sparkling, life-affirming wit, and to be honest I think only Dylan and Berry can stand with them.

 

 

No mention of Cohen in that list????

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by Kevin-W
Originally Posted by Frenchnaim:

 

No mention of Cohen in that list????

To be honest, he is a good lyricist, but I find his music/songs so dreary and turgid I forgot all about him! But you're right - Tom Waits too, probably.

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by fatcat
Originally Posted by Sloop John B:

 

"I saw you in Mercedes Benz
Practicing self-defense
You got it pretty good I guess
I couldn't see your eyes"

 

I might live a thousand years before I know what that means.

 

 


 

I’d say he’s criticising her for being defensive by not looking him in the eye.

 "I saw you in Mercedes Benz, Practicing self-defense”

This is referring to the fact when people go into a car salesroom they make a conscious effort not to make eye contact with a salesman.
She went to a car salesroom to practice not making eye contact or as he sees it, practising being defensive.

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by fatcat
Originally Posted by Frenchnaim:
Originally Posted by Kevin-W:

Tricky one - NY is undoubtedly in the front rank of songwriters, and although some of his lyrics are great, he is maybe a bit too inconsistent. Just outside the very top five, maybe.

 

For me, the greatest lyricist in pop/rock is Chuck Berry, for his technical (eg scansion, rhyme), allusive and narrative skills. His economy is staggering - not a single word, syllable, or breath, is wasted; and his ability to evoke whole worlds and lives in under three minutes never fails to leave me aghast in admiration.

 

Then Dylan, for many of the same reasons, although Dylan's language is more elliptical, and his intent more literary. Ian Curtis is perhaps the closest England has ever come to Dylan in his brilliant use use of imagery, although his writing is less dense than Dylan's, and perhaps more direct.

 

Roger Waters is more direct still, but at his very best, his writing has real simplicity, acuity and emotional power, which is why his finest work (DSOTM, WYWH, Animals, ATD, some of the Wall, TPACOHH, TFC), resonates with listeners of all ages and backgrounds.

 

Lennon at his best, obviously (Macca could turn out brilliant lyrics, as per "Eleanor Rigby", "She's Leaving Home" etc, but could often be utterly facile - unlike Lennon, whose greatest sin as a wordsmith was sentimentality). And as a world-weary chronicler of British life and manners, Ray Davies has no equal.

 

There are others who are really really good, just outside the front rank - Paul Simon (although I don't like his music), Kate Bush, Chuck D of Public Enemy, Sly Stone, Bobbie Gentry ("it was the third of June,  another sleepy dusty Delta day/I was out picking cotton and my brother was baling hay" - that's writing!), Howard Devoto, Mark E Smith (when you can hear him ), Peter Gabriel (post Genesis, mostly), Jarvis Cocker, Lou Reed, Bowie (sometimes), Marvin Gaye, Scott Walker, Townes Van Zandt, Nick Cave, John Lydon, Momus, Joni Mitchell, Morrissey, Polly Harvey, Roy Harper... and Bernie Taupin's penned a few belters. Alex Turner is genius, even if he has never quite scaled the heights of that first AM album.

 

However, real genius lyricists are to be found in an earlier era - Cole Porter, Sammy Cahn, Alan J Lerner, Sondheim, Johnny Mercer, etc - these are virtuoso writers of dazzling technical ability and, most of all, sparkling, life-affirming wit, and to be honest I think only Dylan and Berry can stand with them.

 

 

No mention of Cohen in that list????

Why not make a list of your own favourites, perhaps a few continental artists, Georges Brassens or Jacques Brel ??

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by GraemeH

Andy Partridge & Colin Moulding have crafted some brilliant songs that lyrically stand with the best of them imo.

 

G

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by Sloop John B
Originally Posted by fatcat:
Originally Posted by Sloop John B:

 

"I saw you in Mercedes Benz
Practicing self-defense
You got it pretty good I guess
I couldn't see your eyes"

 

I might live a thousand years before I know what that means.

 

 


 

I’d say he’s criticising her for being defensive by not looking him in the eye.

 "I saw you in Mercedes Benz, Practicing self-defense”

This is referring to the fact when people go into a car salesroom they make a conscious effort not to make eye contact with a salesman.
She went to a car salesroom to practice not making eye contact or as he sees it, practising being defensive.

wonderful, and then the next line?

 

 

 

 

 

SJB

 

 

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by fatcat
Originally Posted by Sloop John B:
Originally Posted by fatcat:
Originally Posted by Sloop John B:

 

"I saw you in Mercedes Benz
Practicing self-defense
You got it pretty good I guess
I couldn't see your eyes"

 

I might live a thousand years before I know what that means.

 

 


 

I’d say he’s criticising her for being defensive by not looking him in the eye.

 "I saw you in Mercedes Benz, Practicing self-defense”

This is referring to the fact when people go into a car salesroom they make a conscious effort not to make eye contact with a salesman.
She went to a car salesroom to practice not making eye contact or as he sees it, practising being defensive.

wonderful, and then the next line?

 

 

 

 

 

SJB

 

 

The next line is self explanatory, I didn't think explanation was needed.

 

"You got it pretty good I guess"

He's saying she became very good at not looking people in the eye (being defensive).

 

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by CariocaJeff

NY - mid table premier league to me. Some of the lyrics on Freedom are excellent, but some on other albums bring him down for me.

 

Along with others memtioned above such as Dylan. Cohen, Lennon, Simon, I would also add the late Alan Hull,  Lindisfarnes most major songwriter. Guess being a Geordie means I am a bit biased, but some of the early songs like Lady Eleanor, the Winter Song, and later ones like Run For Home and Marshell Rileys Army showed how he was able to combine goods songs with some very complex and meaningful issues for the North East. I would also add Cat Stevens to my mid table lyricists, and probably The Boss too.

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by Zipperheadbanjo

If I had to choose an A list... would be (in no particular order):

 

Dylan

Neil

Garcia / Hunter

Lennon / McCartney (their tandem efforts... not their solo work)

 

B list is enormous and really too numerous too mention. And the difference between the A list above and many of the B listers is very very narrow (splitting hairs narrow really).

 

 

 

 

Posted on: 12 September 2015 by Tabby cat

I have always loved in Cinnamon Girl the lines " The drummer relaxes and waits between shows for the Cinnamon Girl "  one of those frowaway lines but paints a picture for your imagination.

 

No collection of music should not have a bit of Neil on the shelf or in the computer.

Posted on: 13 September 2015 by FangfossFlyer

 

Some of Neil's lyrics that have been floating around my scull for decades:
 
"Albuquerque"
 
So I'll stop when I can,
Find some fried eggs
and country ham.
I'll find somewhere where
they don't care who I am.
Oh, Albuquerque,
Albuquerque.
 
"Roll Another Number (For The Road)"
 
I'm not goin' back
to Woodstock for a while,
Though I long to hear
that lonesome hippie smile.
I'm a million miles away
from that helicopter day
No, I don't believe
I'll be goin' back that way.
 
"Borrowed Tube"
 
I'm singin' this borrowed tune
I took from the Rolling Stones,
Alone in this empty room
Too wasted to write my own.
 
All from Tonight's The Night.
 
But, of course, Bob Dylan is the master.
 
Richard
Posted on: 17 September 2015 by Skip

my premiere league would include the classics of American Popular Song, Cole Porter, Johnny Mercer, etc.  For more contemporary, Chuck Berry for sure.  He wrote the same song so well in so many different ways, and rarely plagiarized himself.  I also love Tom Russell,  Robert Earl Keen, and  Richard Thompson.

Posted on: 17 September 2015 by Sneaky SNAIC

Been thinking about this thread for a few days...I'm still believing that the ease of learning the chorus and singability is the most important.  Just listened to the white album and I can sing 5 songs in my head now happily.

 

It's music not poetry...I do not read lyrics printed out in front of me (unless at opera)...so why compare Neil Young to a poet.  We listen to the music *and* hear the lyrics...they have to cause an emotional reaction not while reading a printout, but while listening to the song.

 

Are you listening to a song and singing with the lyrics...in your head?  All day long?  That's music with proper lyrics.

 

"Rocky Raccoon...went into his room...only to find Gideon's Bible."